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I noticed the left shoulder doesn't go back behind the neck, as it does in the beginning. The neck and chin goes different lengths. Las...

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RWBY x Rick and Morty crossover: Did you miss me?
RWBY is owned by Roosterteeth
Rick and Morty is owned by Justin Roiland and Dan Harmon.

Haven't uploaded in a while so did this sketch that took me three hours.
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I noticed the left shoulder doesn't go back behind the neck, as it does in the beginning. The neck and chin goes different lengths. Last the torso doesn't pivot.

For the background, the animation looks like the trees (I'm assuming) are sizing up and down. The leaves / debris are a nice touch, but don't look like they're falling downwards. I know Ruby has super speed, but the background doesn't feel they're whooshing. Adding action lines may help unless you're going to re vamp the trees later.

Last, Ruby has long bangs on her right side.

0207 got some other pointers already.

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crashnburnett
Dark Magic (nickname)
Artist | Student | Film & Animation
United States
Current Residence: Planet Earth
Favourite genre of music: Classical
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Wallpaper of choice: Disgaea/Kingdom Hearts
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93FangShadow Featured By Owner May 9, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconthanksfav1plz::iconthanksfav2plz: of the cosplay photo :camera: Emerald
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crashnburnett Featured By Owner May 9, 2016  Student Filmographer
You're welcome.
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Supro3D Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the watch yo!
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crashnburnett Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Student Filmographer
Yeah no problem.
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MinsunWon Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks for all the faves!!! :heart:
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crashnburnett Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2011  Student Filmographer
Sure thing.
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PaRiYu Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2010
Thanks for the fav =DD
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Kamajii-the-mog Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
Thanks for the Fave 8D~
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shadow-crawler-90 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2009
long time >.>
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crashnburnett Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009  Student Filmographer
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